Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, July 5, 2021
Gorilla information report
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Kia ora Lachie,
ReplyDeleteWow! Your presentation was really interesting to read. I liked how you structured it, using headings to give context to what your paragraph was going to be about.
I learnt a few facts about Gorillas, the saddest being that there are only 880 left in the world. Our family tries to recycle our cell phones properly so that their habitat doesn't continue to be destroyed for the mineral coltan that is used in cell phones.
Is there anything you will change because of the things you learnt about Gorillas?
Keep up the great learning and blogging,
:) Sharon - Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader