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Thursday, December 12, 2019
Fiao’o Fa’amausili
Hi I'm Lachie and I have got a new post about Fiao’o Fa’amausili she is the captain of the black ferns I hope You like it comment by Lachie
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nice
ReplyDeleteHi Lachie, I really liked the way that you used Biteable, something new, did you know that i never new that about Fiao’o Fa’amausili. Maybe next time you could do a little more facts about him so that people could know a little more. but other than that good work!
ReplyDeleteit,s a girl
ReplyDeleteWell done Lachie. I liked it because you got so many facts in a tiny little video. Next time maybe proof read it before you post it.
ReplyDeleteNice work buddy. I didnt even know who she was until now.
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