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Wednesday, April 15, 2020

Apple juice



So for Literacy, I have done some baking well a wouldn't cool it baking. And I made apple juice it was fun but stinky. We put a lot of time into it, but what do you know I failed. Well not really the food explained itself and I think It said it doesn't like me and I don't like it either and I don't think you would either it's that bad. You should try it you might like it if you do it right.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Lachlan
    Making apple juice sounds interesting! I have never done it, but I can imagine it would be quite messy. I like the way you have used your imagination in this piece of writing. One thing that would improve your post is if you used capital letters. Remind yourself next time by writing yourself a note. Before you press post, check out what you have written to see if you have capital letters. Looking forward to more posts from you Lachie! Mrs Pascoe

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  2. Hi its Tyler
    .I like how you are posting about what your doing in lock down.
    .I think it would be helpful if we saw the finished product and you drinking it.
    .I have also been baking in lock down I make chocolate chip cookies.

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