Hi, guys, I have got another post. That I have made on a spark adobe. I have been creating a documentary on Okapis. I hope you enjoy my great work. I have Been doing my work for literacy.
It has been really fun but kind of hard. By Lachie B
Friday, June 5, 2020
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Kia ora Lachie
ReplyDeleteWow I had never even heard of okapis before. Imagine being able to lick your own ear?!!! What was your source to make your documentary? You used such a clear voice and spoke at an ideal speed. What a wonderful effort, keep it up. Ka pai
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Hi my name is Layla from Ahipara school.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you talked about all the facts and it me it was interesting facts you have used are really good. I think I liked the one were you said what the baby was called.Maybe you could do next time add more picture and make it more fun.
hi my name is Lochlan from Ahipara school. I enjoyed the part when the okapis was eating grass.Did you think about the comments that you were going to get? Why did you do a video?
ReplyDeleteHi Lachlan I am Ashlyn from Ahipara school. I loved this post because it is very fun to watch and it has a lot of facts. Did you think about animating your post to make it a lot more interesting? Next time you could make the video a bit longer and more entertaining. Great job!
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